Comments on: Decaffeination:: A Short Story

By: Juliana

Juliana — Tue, 06 Feb 2007 07:23:53 +0000

lovely story!:-) would love to have more people in the picture too!

By: Arun bhai

Arun bhai — Wed, 16 Aug 2006 21:01:34 +0000

Well, I thought it was pretty well known... black tends to make anyone look thinner. I guess it makes you a bit invisible too, but I guess that explains the effect :)

So, I guess I'd advice you to stick to the pastel shades ;)

By: Roweena

Roweena — Wed, 16 Aug 2006 19:45:52 +0000

Can’t believe i actually read this…:- ) interesting! what about black and making a girl look thin?

By: fjose

fjose — Sun, 14 May 2006 10:38:56 +0000

It was great Arun.. I can feel a “writer” sleeping inside you.. Wake him up man…. All the best for all your future endeavors.

By: Pends

Pends — Sun, 16 Apr 2006 03:22:57 +0000

Hey, this is something really nice …… quite a budding literary figure. Really happy to see that you’re making good use of your time in neverland.

By: Arun bhai

Arun bhai — Mon, 13 Mar 2006 06:55:23 +0000

@Jason:

Fact is often stranger (and harsher) than fiction, isn't it? I really hope you wouldn't end up in that not-so-envious situation

By: Jason Bourne

Jason Bourne — Wed, 08 Mar 2006 19:28:01 +0000

Hi Arun,

I am sure this is a page from ur diary. And I am damn sure, it is going to be a page from my diary also.

Keep writing.

By: Arun bhai

Arun bhai — Mon, 06 Mar 2006 17:11:18 +0000

@Suchi:

Glad to know that you enjoyed it. As you have correctly pointed out the lack of an ending makes this post a 'slice of life' account. Yes, a piece of something bigger.

Again, I'm just starting out, so wish me luck ;)

By: Suchi

Suchi — Fri, 03 Mar 2006 10:41:43 +0000

Dear A,

I am just amazed at the amount of detailing that you provided. It is like a chapter out of novel, so maybe u shd try your hand at writing novels or maybe novellas for a start.

>>She wouldnt know what it is like to be home at Diwali. More importantly she wouldnt know what it is like not to be home at Diwali. An ignoramus. A cross cultural freak. A word thats stripped of its etymology. Pathetic!

These were by far the best lines in the story and seems to speak of a certain literary buff sitting in you.

But then as an audience , as a reader of the writer, you expect an ending, a happy ending, a sad ending , you cannot just wait to hear that things are as they are and that life simply moves on. So i was kind of hoping mid way through that something would "happen" between the two of them ;).

But on the whole a nice experience. Keep more of these flowing.